antiihero

Wow I really liked this, the whole thing is very well written. I'm planning to write a dystopian story myself and I've considered including artificial intelligence. I really wasn't expecting ...

I like this poem because I interpret it to be the monster adopting human virtues to become acceptable. It's kind of sad really that he is rejected by all who ...

I really like the plot idea you have and I hope the second chapter is posted soon! Your writing is well paced and the dialogue reads easily like normal speech. ...

I really liked this story and I think you got the message across quiet clearly and effectively revealed a loss of innocence in children when they discover the tragic extent ...

This poem is truly disturbing and I feel like the narrator is a serial killer like Ted Bundy who lured his victims by donning a 'nice guy' facade. Some stanza's ...

I quite like this and I feel as if it speaks from a child's perspective and their comfort in night lights (because the dark is spooky and full of monsters). ...

I want more! That's what this needs. Flesh your story out, make your chraracter's real- give them powerful goals, fears and flaws. You've already done this on some level, but ...