anonymousgirl

Thank you so much! I really appreciate it :) That's what I was going for! I was playing around with omniscient narrative disguised as limited. But thanks again for the ...

Thanks for the truthfulness! :) He was so nervous and so worried that he would be rejected that he decided he'd wait one more year to admit that he liked ...

I'm so glad someone picked up on the little things I added in! I guess what I was going here was for a little bit of realism- how a guy ...

Hi smanske15! Thank you so much! You have no idea how much that means to me. Thanks for also pointing out all my errors. I always use too many commas ...

That was really good! I loved how you made up the name Lightning McQueen as a reference to a fake celebrity dragon. It was really creative and all your little ...