- Re: On Baseball Cleats and Hats Jun 12, 2015
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Re: On Baseball Cleats and Hats
Beautiful poem..very realistic. Maybe more about the bond between the friendship. Maybe mention memories you all share together. Other than that it's really good. Love the ending:)
Jun 12, 2015 -
Re: What Kind Of World
'What kind of world fores you to live?" That hit me. Hard. Very morbid but in an interesting way. You had me thinking throughout the whole piece. I was hanging ...
Jun 12, 2015 -
Re: What Kind Of World
'What kind of world fores you to live?" That hit me. Hard. Very morbid but in an interesting way. You had me thinking throughout the whole piece. I was hanging ...
Jun 12, 2015