annabanana

Well, I think you poem is great the way it is, no fixes needed! I personaly really love the rhyme, you did an excellent job with the rhyme and rhythm, ...

This is amazing, I don't think I can find the words to start! When I started reading I was instantly hooked right in, I am a picky reader and this ...

Your poem was very deep, i see a ton emotion pouing inside your poem. you're very good at writing although your rhythem changed a little bit towards the end, but ...

That was very good, i really enjoyed it, it gave me tingles!!! :lol: And your rythem was awesome it drew me to keep on reading. You should publish a book ...