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LOL this one's not mine :P

^I think that it goes like this: The streaks on my cheeks No one can see I wear no mascara So I cannot bleed I guess it lacks spacing, so ...

@born: Thanks! I knew the tense in "Hannah's my classmate in college" sounded wrong LOL and yeah, I SHOULD do a bit more elaborating on WHY she called HIM instead ...

yeah thanks. but if i did what you have suggested, i'd be wrong in tenses and plurality. thanks. you have nice ideas though you pretty much changed the whole context ...

“How about your friends?” “They all have work today. I’m on a half-day today so I was thinking of watching a movie to end my day today. So how about ...

I so love you right now for reviewing my works so patiently, kindly, and professionaly! I'll fix this, the next one you'll be seeing would probably have 2 chapters by ...

OMG i totally didn't clean it right. you see, this was written in present tense before, when i decided that flashbacks would work better. i apologize for the tenses @_@ ...

wow, someone actually loved this work :) i'm so happy. thank you for reading and critiquing!

it tells of a man who died because he was drunk when he fixed some cables. he's in an inescapable world wherein he'll continue to experience his death over and ...

hmmm...she killed her friends when they saw how she cheated on the man she loved. its like the friends found out what she did and now they hate her. she ...

I wish he wouldn't post and post his own works though. Try reviewing a little, he's already violating rules since we're not allowed to post unless we have 2 credible ...

I also had the same idea about the iron thing! haha I didn't change it though. I guess I just wanted to say that everything ends, that even something that ...

I kinda rocked my head a little here :) It's a wonderful start for your book. I'm hoping to see the continuation.