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Re: (Untitled)
lol i guess if there was an excuse, it would be that i really suck at showing .-. and yes, the ending really had me confused too LOL and maybe ...
Jan 4, 2010 -
Re: A Little Fantasy Chapter 1: A New Beginning
Thank you for this! I will make sure that this story gets your interest once I'm done with it.
Dec 12, 2009 -
Re: A Little Fantasy Chapter 2: Never Forgotten
I knew I could always count on you guys. Thanks for such an in-depth review. It is more than I could ever ask for.
Dec 12, 2009 -
Re: A Little Fantasy Chapter 2: Never Forgotten
You're the kind of reviewer that I like. Always pinpointing the mistakes I make :D I am forever humble for your efforts.
Dec 10, 2009 -
Re: A Little Fantasy Chapter 2: Never Forgotten
thanks for the redundancy check. the dates...I'm actually trying to have a hint of Audrey Niffenegger's way when she wrote TTTW. the date will be significant in the upcoming chapters. ...
Dec 10, 2009 -
Re: I still do
If you guys would notice the fact that this poem is unisex :D it's for neither girl nor boy but for both. thanks. i know it's cliche but i just ...
Dec 7, 2009 -
Re: Save Me
about your corrections: if i use your corrections, it would probably ruin the poem. so thanks anyway. and it's not in past tense per se. you really have to understand ...
Dec 3, 2009 -
Re: Draft help: Prologue to the fantasy ver 2
I am grateful for the reviews you made for me. I didn't realize how boring my characters were until you came along! Thank you times a million squared!
Dec 2, 2009 -
Re: A Little Fantasy Chapter 1 continuation
:D I love Paris! I've never been there but I have my own ideas of what Paris is like based on what I read. I really planned on using a ...
Dec 2, 2009 -
Re: A Little Fantasy Chapter 1: A New Beginning
Yes. I admit that "telling over showing" is my real problem. I've been trying my best to improve on this aspect by over describing things, as you noticed on my ...
Dec 2, 2009 -
Re: Save Me
I am filled with joy upon reading your review *tears of joy* I really put heart into this one. You know what, I'll take your advice. It really sounds better. ...
Dec 2, 2009 -
Re: The Staircase of the Everyday Teenager
I really like the fact that you made it so that it IS a staircase! another amazing work. the ending kind off sounded forced for me though. and "trued"? or ...
Nov 27, 2009 -
Re: hustisiya, nasaan?
OT: I'm a Filipino :) I second what KA said. Filipino is your language of expertise.
Nov 27, 2009 -
Re: A Little Fantasy Chapter 1 continuation
@kaykel: wow! didn't notice them the misuse of words, terms, and punctuations! thank you for pinpointing them! I was really confused at whether to use marriage or wedding that I ...
Nov 26, 2009 -
Re: Waking
^Were the bolded words meant as a "replacement"? because it's unnecessary once you see the big picture that KJ wanted you to see.
Nov 26, 2009
