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Re: Cement Sealed Lips
It was great but i do have a question about stanza 6 line 4 "hate comes fast to wring me" what exactly does that mean?
Aug 28, 2008 -
Re: mother!
i like the emotions put into it. In my opion it was great and i can relate to the pain in it so that made me understand the feelings more.
May 17, 2008 -
Re: mother!
i like the emotions put into it. In my opion it was great and i can relate to the pain in it so that made me understand the feelings more.
May 17, 2008 -
Re: Untitled
I like the poem. The morbidity of it was intriguing. But it kinda seems like you left out part of the story.
May 17, 2008