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I fixed it. Still keeping like children though. It fits for me when I read it out loud ^.^. Yea, As many that hang out there I was surprised.

I think it's wonderful. I got the little out of the blue analogy with the brainstems. haha. It is funny when you think about it.

Thanks, i understand that because of the whole thing it's hard to understand, I orginally wrote it for a funeral of a little baby cousin of mine to be put ...

That is so true, the seasons always seem to echo a song of their own, winters chills, the autmn winds, the springs rain and summer, what a beautiful poem. Music ...

Excellent poem. I always like poems that make sense but don't ryhme or anything. Haha I've had a discouraging thing happen lately with that. Haha.