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Re: Two Weeks, One
This is really interesting. I don't usually read these sort of things and I can't say I found it amazing but it was good and I did enjoy it, so ...
Oct 16, 2011 -
Re: What is the Best Book you have read...
My favourite book is And baby Makes Two by Dyan Sheldon, 200 pages, got through it is two days! I love it because the characters in it are so strong ...
Oct 15, 2011 -
Re: Book Name: Wolf's Graceful Heart: Prologue
Hi, I am here to review! I didn't really get a feel for the beginning, "One apon a time" reminds me of a children's book starter, and I didn't like ...
Oct 15, 2011 -
Re: Chapter 3 -- Means
This is okay. Not really my cup-of-tea, and I don't really read these sort of things. Maybe you could give it a new title because, to be honest, I thought ...
Oct 14, 2011 -
Re: By the Red Fence (Prolouge)
I was intrigued to read this as it is done by an amuteur, but you have written it very well and I really enjoyed it. I am still intrigued to ...
Oct 14, 2011 -
Re: writing essay
Umm... I'm not sure what to say to this. I guess you're just trying to make a point by googling writing essay then copying and pasting it but no offence, ...
Oct 14, 2011 -
Re: Not just Child's Play
Wow, I really like this so far. You are a really good writer. However, it's so many words I never got to read the whole thing, but the first three ...
Oct 14, 2011 -
Re: Hello. (Contest entry)
This is a well written story. Although, no offence, if you work on it and used other words for something to make it sound so much better would be good. ...
Oct 14, 2011 -
Re: your great might
A s life shall turn , all will burn at the sight , O f your great might , N o one will learn , and their hearts will yearn ...
Oct 13, 2011 -
Re: Autumn
This is very creative, and really nice. I like your style, and don't worry, I do know autumned isn't a word and some people would nit-pick that, but I think ...
Oct 13, 2011 -
Re: Wooing in the Desert
Wow, this is really deep. I love things like this and I really love how you worded this. Well done. I do have no nit-picks, but I want to put ...
Oct 12, 2011 -
Re: Why I Write..
This is good. But I am confused on what the purpose of this is. Is it a poem? Or just something to prove people? I'm very unsure and I'm not ...
Oct 12, 2011 -
Re: The Meaning Of Love - Chapter One
Well done, this is a good idea. You really need to check over your spellings and make sure you notice that real names such as Charlotte has a capital letter. ...
Oct 12, 2011 -
Re: Boys like girls like boys things
This is really good. It's passionate and I can tell you have really thought about what to write. I think overall what you have wrote is really creative and something ...
Oct 12, 2011
