andrew.j.m

Usually I don't like reading things like this, but this one kept my eyes pretty busy reading every word. So good job. It sounds like a good start to a ...

The way you described Jenny was great. It shows the hatred for her in a slightly humorous form. At first I liked the first part better, but by the end ...

This is great stuff. So many people want to be what the world wants them to be. When we accept ourselves for who and what we are, then we can ...

I like your ideas on here, and I think people aren't posting because they are offended that you don't share the belief that a stranger is a friend you haven't ...

I like how it doesn't say that it's the father thats with this person until close to the end. It is really good. But if I had to make a ...

I see where you're coming from on this one. I'm a guy. I'm in highschool. So i see all the guys treating the girls badly. Always doubting them, and cheating ...

This actually made me shiver a little. Most kids talk about how much they hate their mom and ruin their lives. It get the sense of how much you miss ...

It's great how you kept repeating "all these scars spell out your name", it's a great line and says so much. The mood was set instantly and we all knew ...