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This is a great poem! I love it but it could flow a little better near the beggining

Thanks guys! Sonni: Yes pablo would love this poem! :D Everyone is good. Brownie is old, Kuma is wild, and Lola is still very small... Matt Bellamy: Thank you, I'll ...

Wow thanks everyone for all your great crits. About the "scrappy", part, yeah... I'm changing that... Well thanks!!! It really helps!!!

I think this s a really nice poem, but I agree that it needs a better rhythm. But good work, it is really nice!!! Bravo! :smt041

Wow! This is amazing! I love it, I love how you show so much connection between the girl and the seal. Really, it is amazing. I do agree though, that ...

Thanx Everyone! Thank You Sonni!!! Everyone has good help!!!!!