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Re: Damn Near Burnt
I'm such a big fan of poetry and this was beautiful. I love this piece so much and I can feel the narrators pain. This was excellent and I look ...
Sep 23, 2015 -
Re: Should I?
oh my thank you so much, this means so much to me. i really appreciate all that.
Sep 19, 2015 -
Re: Should I?
thank you so much, that was wonderful advice.
Sep 19, 2015 -
Re: Should I?
Thank you very much for this thoughtful and specific review, it really helps me to understand what I can improve for my next piece. First, I wanted shadows to represent ...
Apr 3, 2015 -
Re: Should I?
Thank you so much and I know it looked way to short, I should have had a beginning. I will keep your advice in mind.
Apr 3, 2015 -
Re: Should I?
Thank you very much and I do understand why it sounded confusing for the "Or let go of my life" I was actually thinking of changing it to "Or just ...
Apr 3, 2015 -
Re: my story choater 1
First of all, the grammar is extremely off. There is barely good use of punctuation, no capitalization, and no complete words. This "novel" seems like you're trying to make a ...
Apr 2, 2015
