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I really love this poem. I think you did a fantastic job on the voice and flowing rhythm. As well, I think it is good that you repeat "Hand me ...

Hey! I really enjoyed this poem. The title is very fitting and you have a great sort of rhythm going for you. I think the not capitalizing works for this ...

Hey! I really enjoyed these lyrics. The first verse is, in my opinion, the strongest. I laughed at the line: "Because they're jealous; only love their pets." It feels like ...

Wow. What amazing emotion. I love rant-y break-up poems (mine are mostly that). Here's some of my thoughts: Endlessly until I hurt you as Much as you did to me ...

I thought this wasn't cliche-y at all. It was so full of emotion and that's never a cliche. A couple nitpicks: 1. You tend to forget to capitalize "I" in ...

I thought this was pretty darn good, for when you were 13. (I could never come close to this when I was that age.) :) I thought the title could ...

Wow. This is one crazy amazing poem. I love it, I really do. Firstly, your imagery was fantastic! Serious, I am speechless. I'll try and suck it up, though. I ...

I think this is a great poem! I agree with the previous reviewer, it is so true. I actually wanted it to be longer. The beginning is an amazing start ...

I loved this poem! It made me laugh so hard! I couldn't find anything that needed changing. Except that I agree with dogs that you should put it in dramatic ...

Wow. I really want to hear this sung! I agree with hudz96, that your rhyming wasn't always consistent. Actually, I thought the parts that didn't rhyme were some of the ...

I thought this was great. I am very envious of your imagery! I agree with tanya98 about the hungry part. I think you just need to change the "of growing ...

I love this poem so much! I thought it was terrific! What a great idea. It's ironic, because you write about unoriginality, in a poem that is so original. The ...

I really enjoyed reading this poem. It has an amazing message. The biggest thing you could do to improve it would be to try to make it sound less like ...

Wow. I love this poem. *clicks like* I couldn't find anything that needed changing, other than what the others said, so I shall just praise! My favorite parts: (Oh, I ...

I liked this. It made me smile! Your rhyming wasn't consistent, it switched around so be careful. Here are some things to consider: It feels great to finally bloom; to ...