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I really enjoyed it. You took a small amount of simple lines and made them so much better with some great vocabulary and really good imagery.

It was good. A bit confusing, even though it was pretty short and simple. But good.

I don't think you should change anything about the piece. Your right, it was simple, but that's what made it so good. I think it would almost ruin the piece ...

Well, I can always count on you to say exactly what you feel. I like that.

I really liked this piece. It made me think of all of those small things that I do or say that I so easily forget about and how that could ...

I really liked this piece and recommend the title Princess. I think that you took a very basic, universal theme and you made less basic, more complex. It was well ...

Great job! It flows well and reminds me of a children's chant.

I thought this was great. As Snoik said, it is very simple and that simplicity worked well with this piece. It was precise and delivered the point right on target. ...

After reading other people's responses to the story, I'm ashamed to admit that I believed it. *shrugs* You had me convinced.

I'd have to say that the blue roses was my favorite, with red roses coming in a close second. They just seem to go "Wow! Look at me!" The others ...