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Re: (Wondering About) Anonymous
Wow! I loved it. It reminds me of a piece of poetry I once wrote. It had the same theme, but you seemed to get your point across so much ...
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Re: Atomic Number 50
I don't know quite what to say. It was beautiful. It made me think and I liket that. Atomic Number 50....would be Tin. What's the significance of tin? Am I ...
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Re: The Scenery
She slips me a knife “Use it wisely,” she cries But the room is just silent She speaks with her eyes I love this verse. It's a great opener and ...
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Re: To My Father
I thought it was great. Amazing creativity and imagery. I disagree with Sophie. I don't have a great relationship with my father but your poem gives me hope that others ...
Sep 25, 2005 -
Re: Upon that Meadow
I know this is odd to say. But I like the title. It made me picture all kinds of scenarios and when I started reading the piece, I tried to ...
Sep 25, 2005 -
Re: A Day in the Life
I thought this piece was great! It really grabbed my attention and held on. I love those pieces that have so much great imagination poured in and leave you thinking ...
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Re: "Memories" wrote quickly..
I sometimes sit and gaze into the murky ravine while sitting in the dilapidated shack, riverside. I thought that this line could be a bit more powerful. It is the ...
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Re: The Pouring out of my heart
The rain is coming down so hard, Pouring through my heart, Trying to fill the holes, That were left behind. The rain pours through it, Harder each time, Runs right ...
Sep 25, 2005
