ambitious123

Thanks. Yeah, the repetitiveness was done on purpose as I plan to use this as a spoken word piece, feedback is greatly appreciated :)

Thank you so much! I completely understand where you're coming from and I really appreciate the feedback. I've made some changes to the prologue recently and I'll post that up ...

Thank you so much! I completely understand where you're coming from and I really appreciate the feedback. I've made some changes to the prologue recently and I'll post that up ...