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thank you for review! yeaa this chapter has a lot of editing to do. so does the others. thanks for pointing out the mistakes. I appreciate it!

thank you for your lovely review(: ! wow I'm really glad you enjoyed it! I didn't expect such praises, since it really is my first poem. As for the symbol ...

Hey that would be an awesome. But be warned I'm still like super new to poetry so you will def have to show me the ropes lol. Just lmk whenever ...

Lol I just did!

Hello musicandme! Wow I'm glad you enjoyed it! I mean since this is basically the first poem I ever wrote (I don't count the ones in kindergarten). I'm so glad ...

Hi! Thanks for your review! I agree more imagery could be used. I never really thought about describing his physical features. Now that I think about it, I'm thinking about ...

Lol, I know I'm sorry! Nadia is a really tough character. Or at least I tried to portray her that way. She's been through a lot. & Drina was the ...

Hey thanks BookWolf! I know I made a ton of changes. I still have more to edit though. Thanks for your review!!!!

Hello rissymay! I know its soooo late I'm responding to this, but I just wanted to say thank you for your review! You were right about the story jumping around. ...

Thanks for your review!! I tried to add more description to Nadia's campsite. Also, thanks for the corrections!

I'm glad your liking it so far! Lmk what you think of chapter 3. Yeaa I made him a little mean because he had just gotten into a fight, & ...

So I read what everyone was saying & I also think you should continue this story! I want to know what happens & the vampire's background story! With that being ...

thank you, I'm glad you liked it (:

well in that case, I take back what I said. The demon dog was just hungry hahahha.

lmao, yes my uncle's house. & his fricken schizophrenia Chihuahua from hell almost mauled my face off.