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Re: Toothpaste
ty!
May 4, 2020 -
Re: Toothpaste
tysm!
May 4, 2020 -
Re: It wasn't her fault
Thanks for reading!
Apr 12, 2020 -
Re: Heartbeat
Any time! :)
Apr 11, 2020 -
Re: Heartbeat
welcome to YWS!
Apr 10, 2020 -
Re: It wasn't her fault
Thanks!!!
Apr 10, 2020 -
Re: Almost Dead, Chapter 1
Great job^^
Apr 9, 2020 -
Re: It wasn't her fault
Thanks! :)
Apr 9, 2020 -
Re: It wasn't her fault
Tysm!^^
Apr 9, 2020 -
Re: Following The Light-Chapter 1-
Hi! I just re-read the ending. It's a v good addition and ties off the chapter without ending it too much. Looking foward to for chapter two, ~ amazing bt
Apr 9, 2020 -
Re: Toothpaste
Thanks! Next time, I will try to tie in the character's actions with the conflict (to show what toothpaste has to do with the story). Thanks for the review!!
Apr 7, 2020 -
Re: Scorpions
Ok, cool!
Mar 28, 2020 -
Re: Gods and guardians-chapter 1
No problem at all! I totally get where you were going with the mentor/aunt relationship now that you mention it! 3. (clarifying what I meant) What I meant by "But ...
Mar 28, 2020 -
Re: Gods and guardians-chapter 1
great job!^^
Mar 28, 2020 -
Re: Toothpaste
Thanks^^
Mar 28, 2020