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Hi, and welcome to YWS! Okay, first of all, this story was really incredible. I loved the beginning where you say "She hears everything" because it really ties back to ...

Okay, wow! This story was definitely not what I expected (in a good way). It is so intense, and honestly, I can relate to the main character because honestly, sometmes ...

Hi! I noticed your story had a few gramatical errors. Here are a few edits that I think should be made: `“Tadashi is that really the best idea? A mansion ...

Hi Em16! I just re-watched the Star Wars movies this week, and I was brutally reminded of Ben Solo's death. Mostly because I shipped Reylo so much. This was honestly, ...

There were a few gramatical mistakes. Here are some of them: "He can’t sure if he has touch someone while moving on the pavement, maybe too drunk to notice anything ...

I really like this. It was really interesting. It leaves a few questions unanswered, but not at all in a bad way. It made me question my life right now. ...

Poems are made to make the reader feel something. This poem made me feel confused, so I applaud you for that. However, a poem needs to have some sort of ...

1. The beginning: I think that you had a lot of good ideas with the soul flowers, but I don't think you should have started off with that much information. ...

I really do like the story line in this piece, and how you developed the character or Ms. Pringle. I especially love the line " Jep is the only thing ...

I really like this piece! I really enjoyed the opening as well. The only thing I would have done was added a bit more of detail describing the relationship between ...