amandajo

Hi. I really liked the raw emotion, like how MoonTitanZan said. The emotion speaks for itself. I like that your poem has a certain kind of structure, it really compliments ...

This was a pretty awesome poem. I liked how you created your own style of writing. I thought that it was simple yet understandable, if that makes sense. :) Keep ...

There were some errors (spelling, grammar, punctuation) but everyone makes mistakes. I really liked this poem. It has a nice rhythm. I have an idea about the title. I think ...

I liked this poem a lot. Although I really didn't understand what you were saying. It seemed kind of frazzled. I dont know how but that's how it came across ...