alyssatan

So cliche. If you're going to write an immortal or vampire story, there needs to be something unique about it. I know this is only a sampling, but if you ...

So to be honest this chapter was a bit of a disappointment for me after reading the first one. I was drawn in before, I wanted to know what happened ...

I'm going to get my grammar issues out of the way first. There were quite a few instances, including in the title, when you wrote insomniac's without an apostrophe. When ...

In all honesty I was a little confused throughout the entire thing. The writing isn't bad, but the storyline doesn't make much sense to me, if there is one besides ...