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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Alone and Solo

    I liked this poem because it really seemed like you were searching within yourself as you wrote it. "Alone and Solo" seems a little redundant, but I hesitate to critique ...

    Mar 30, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: In My Dreams

    Wow, that was really beautiful. I just have some suggestions that might make easy quick fixes (should you choose to heed them). You used a lot of great imagery, but ...

    Mar 30, 2008


Poetry is my cheap means of transportation. By the end of the poem the reader should be in a different place from where he started. I would like him to be slightly disoriented at the end, like I drove him outside of town at night and dropped him off in a cornfield.
— Billy Collins