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Re: As yet untitled novel - Chapter one
Alright, I'm going to skip the grammar stuff because I think it's been covered by the post above mine. Plot wise, I liked what you did with the continuation of ...
Jan 18, 2009 -
Re: The Path - Chapter Two
I broke it up a bit, I'm not sure if they could be smaller. Are there other places i should make a new paragraph?
Jan 13, 2009