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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Core Cities Chapter Two Part One

    The beginning of your book is very eye catching and makes me want to read the rest o your book but the setting is a little unclear -keep up the ...

    Jun 9, 2014
  • Lyrics » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: my bro's parody on "Let it go"

    that's so funny!!!

    Jun 9, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: The Capital

    thanks i loved the long note you gave me and i plan to folow all your wonderfull advice

    Aug 18, 2013
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: Ace and Det -- Prolog

    Thank you for the really long review I read all of it and iI had no idea you had to start another paragraph when a charactor is speaking. P.S; Ace ...

    Aug 17, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I will not die a shell

    I liked the poem you just submitted. It had a lot of big vocab words. Along with a lot of meaning. I hope I can read more of your great ...

    Aug 17, 2013


The bigger the issue, the smaller you write. Remember that. You don’t write about the horrors of war. No. You write about a kid’s burnt socks lying on the road. You pick the smallest manageable part of the big thing, and you work off the resonance.
— Richard Price