alicat159

Aw, you deleted it? Well, I guess I'll read some more of your work then. :]

I understand. However, adding in more cats to do the hunt takes a lot of concentration and time, neither of which I have much of. It involves creating more cats, ...

Um, ClimberSquirrel, if you look at her review, she was referring to the 11th line in Chapter 1, where you stated: " The eagle swooped lower, closing in on the ...

Hey! Now it's time for a little harsher critique. Don't feel bad, I'm just going to point stuff out and make suggestions. It's very short, but I want to keep ...

wwjnd, I'll check it out! thanks!

It was the first Stephen King book I've read, so I'm kinda excited.

I guess no one else read it...

I love it! Truly random. :wink: alicat

Thanks! I'll be sure to fix that!

Thanks, I'll edit it ASAP. I wrote this one day when I was beyond bored, so it's definatily not great. Also, I loved the line by line critique. (I agree ...

Okay! Well, I can't wait for part II! PM me when it's done! :wink: Alicat159

Hey, Thanks for the reviews and I'll work on it some more. I just wanted to show it to people, I guess. ( Eimear - I didn't expect to wow ...

Ummm... thanks for the review but this story isn't complete and it's my first one. It's obvious that you are so far building Suzanna as a strong character, but none ...

Thanks, I hadn't noticed that. I just added more to it today, so thanks for reviewing it. I'll fix those right now.

Great Job! It was nicely written and very pleasant to read. I loved the way you wrote it and I'll be looking at more of your works.