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Re: Day of a prostitute
This is like whoa :/ It shows a glimpse in the life of a "whore" but thats fine. Her life is in brackets for what reason? Its very distracting when ...
Oct 2, 2013 -
Re: Run And Hide. (Edited)
Haha :)
Oct 2, 2013 -
Re: Run And Hide. (Edited)
I had the same problem before when editing.I did it in pargraphs,but it comes out in a dabble. Im sorry.
Oct 2, 2013 -
Re: Run And Hide. (Edited)
Thanks :)
Oct 2, 2013 -
Re: Run And Hide Chappie 1
Thanks! I honestly dont know how the jumbling happened! i divided into paragraphs as I was editing.Thanks for the feedback ,though!
Sep 25, 2013 -
Re: Return Of The Unwanted Dead. Chapter 4
I love this book! Really interesting,great storyline,great everything, keep up the good work!
Sep 4, 2013 -
Re: Run And Hide. (Edited)
Actually no Prolouge, Just Chapters now that I thought about it thanks.
Sep 4, 2013 -
Re: Run And Hide. (Edited)
Thanks for your help! Edited version will be up! Could you read the other chapter? As soon as i post It!
Sep 4, 2013