alexismwarr

This was an interesting story very readable but there are a couple of things I'm going to nitpick just a little bit. First off, I can tell that you speant ...

This short story is really captivating. It's an attention grabber. I wasn't bored while reading this whatsoever because I love your writing style. I hate reading a writer's work that ...

I really love this! I read this twice because there were some parts I really thought were great! My favorite lines are, "Fair as she was, I had to chase ...

This seems very interesting so far. You could defiantly go far with this. The only thing I think you should change is the "Resa, Resa! Oh, my poor baby!! Resa, ...