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Thanks for the feedback Man or Girl. I appreciate your honesty:))

Thanks for the feedback:) When you get a chance, check out the new one I posted called Cameron's Journal:)

Since you liked this one, check out the new story I posted when you get a chance Cameron's Journal. I think you and the rest of the commenters on this ...

Thanks a lot for the feedback:)) If you want to read a short story about a troubled adolescent, check out the new story I posted called Cameron's Journal.

THANKS FOR YOUR FEEDBACK!:)) CHECK OUT MY NEW LITTLE DIDDY THAT I POSTED

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WOW! Is all I can say. You hit this one out of the park! I really felt like I could connect with your characters and you painted the picture beautifully. ...

Thanks a lot for the feedback guys! I know it needs some editing and it's far from done. I kind of want to make it into a novel. The virgin ...

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I thought you did a god damn gnarly job of writing this mate. You weren't afraid to curse, you played the part, you did what you had to do, and ...

I like it magpie. I'd like to see some more to make a true review. You may want to add some punctuation. But other than that, I loved it.