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Re: Jay's Decision
Thank you for your review! But I do have a little bit of a background story on Jay and Henry. They are two kids who grew up in this institute ...
Mar 31, 2013 -
Re: Jay's Decision
I'm sorry I couldn't help but notice, but did you just quote StoryWeaver13, ThothMagic, and MagnusTerrenum? I don't know why you did that, but it's creative and tricky. I like ...
Mar 31, 2013 -
Re: The Fall of Domina Clepta -Chapter Two
“Then go tell your sons to get up and get read." I assume you meant ready? "You wait here, and don't touch anything” There should be a period at the ...
Mar 31, 2013 -
Re: Jay's Decision
Thank you so much for your review, it really helps! And as for the lack of exposition, I had intended for this to be a scene sometime after all the ...
Mar 27, 2013 -
Re: Mirrored
Okay first thing first, I absolutely love this story idea! It is very exciting and intriguing and does not seem to be going an any know cliche path yet. However ...
Mar 25, 2013