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Hey Random! I haven't really reviewed a lot on YWS lately because I couldn't find something that caught my attention enough, but this did! From the first sentence you draw ...

This is a very nice piece. :) Is this just the first chapter, or is it supposed to be a stand alone story? Just curious. So, I have to agree ...

One of my favorite books is The Goose Girl by Shannon Hale. It's the book I always go back to when I have nothing else to read. It's based on ...

I liked the vampire diaries as well. The only thing I didn't like was Elena. It really bothered me how Elena gets everything she wants. That part really bothered me. ...

Hey Nature! I really, really liked this! I think you caught the two moods perfectly. Here are just a couple things I thought might add to your story: My complexion ...

Hi Sydney! I'll be offering you just a few quick tips on your story. First of all, I really liked the actual plot. I think it has a lot of ...

I really liked this because I think that a lot of people can relate to it. I think there are times when everybody wants to just keep going, break out ...

Hi Forestqueen! :) I'm going to do a quick review of your story. I saw a lot of untapped potential in this piece, which I realize probably comes from the ...

Hello! First I'm going to tell you the things I liked and then some things that bothered me a bit. The morning was in its awfully premature hours I loved ...

I have to say that I loved this piece! You had me hooked with the first line. I love your character and the way you kind of let us get ...

Hello Doctor. :) You said be harsh, so harsh I shall be. . . But you should be pleased to know that there's really not too much to harshly critique. ...

This story is just amazing! I have to admit that I'm a litle curious as to what the genre is. It's in nonfiction, but does that mean it's a true ...