aeroman

Okay, well I'm sticking to my promise, I'm sorry that I haven't been able to get to crit your work till now. But here we go! First of all I'm ...

I loved the story snoink, it felt like you were leading me along with a little thread, haha. Your descriptions were very vivid to me and I really could feel ...

I really enjoy your writing Myth. You have a certain pizazz, or knack, for leading me on and making me want to read more. I envy how you write so ...

Hey blazing, well since you did a crit on my story, I will return the favor. First of all (I'm going to be blunt), I was bored. I would not ...

I like your story a lot! It has that simplistic fairy tale style to it that I haven't read in a while. You did a very good job for trying ...

The problem I have with the story is that you don't give me a description of how the boy looks or a name. Now if you want the name to ...