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Thank you for the reviews. They have helped a lot

I hope this version is better. Thank you for all the suggestions

This was never meant to be taken as a dream. I am currently rewriting the chapter so it becomes a little more clearer as to what is going on. Thanks ...

Nope. I knew this needed fixing. You both really helped me out.

Not at all. That's what i was looking for. I plan to re-do this chapter.

Thank you. I plan to re-do this chapter and now i know how to fix it.

Thank you. I knew that there were problems but i didn;t know how to fix it. Turns out all i needed was another person who knows how to write. This ...