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Thank you! :) yes I wanted to emphasize Her because it reffered to Death so I thought people would get confused if it reffered to the girl or Death. Yes, ...

Thanks for the comment and advice! :D It's just that I find it more right with the punctation (which doesn't actually mean it is right I guess xD). So thanks, ...

Wow, thank you! XD Well, I did break it up to stanzas, but when I pasted it here I didn't notice the spaces disappeared. And yeah, it really looks like ...

Thank you, I appreciate your comment. I'll try my best. :)

Actually, wow, I had to listen to that song, and I guess it does. And I don't really understand why I would feel frustrated and guilty, but it can be ...

Haha, thanks :D

Thanks for the review!! I think I'll do an upgraded version of it when I get another wave of inspiration, and consider all of your advice. Really happy for all ...

Thank you very much! I will look out for it, I just felt like publishing something and as I wrote in a previous reply English isn't my native, so I ...

Thank you so much! I honestly didn't expect this and I feel so happy now. I actually did group every four lines into stanzas, but it came out like this. ...