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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: One Moment

    This poem is beautiful tragic but this is discordant. Incompatibility Rhyme and addition Has a complex structure.

    Dec 28, 2014
  • Other » Other, General Re: suitable title?

    I appreciate of you for your comment, I myself very used of your help. thanks

    Jul 29, 2013
  • Other » Other, General Re: suitable title?

    I appreciate of you for your comment, I myself very used of your help. thanks

    Jul 29, 2013
  • Other » Other, General Re: suitable title?

    I appreciate of you for your comment, I myself very used of your help. thanks

    Jul 29, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Historical Fiction Re: The Neon-Silver War (1st-4th Paragraph)

    this story is very beautiful, but I think Exist Conflict or Imbalance Between Events and Describing the scene in this novel. I Recommend to you decrease this describing. appreciate you ...

    Jul 29, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: Pouring Shadows (Chapter 6)

    Jul 28, 2013


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