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Re: One Moment
This poem is beautiful tragic but this is discordant. Incompatibility Rhyme and addition Has a complex structure.
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Re: suitable title?
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Jul 29, 2013 -
Re: suitable title?
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Jul 29, 2013 -
Re: suitable title?
I appreciate of you for your comment, I myself very used of your help. thanks
Jul 29, 2013 -
Re: The Neon-Silver War (1st-4th Paragraph)
this story is very beautiful, but I think Exist Conflict or Imbalance Between Events and Describing the scene in this novel. I Recommend to you decrease this describing. appreciate you ...
Jul 29, 2013 - Re: Pouring Shadows (Chapter 6) Jul 28, 2013
