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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Pinpoint

    Hi There! Well it was an amazing poem! The choice of words was good, and the description was highly vivid. There was a certain flow to the whole poem which ...

    Jun 27, 2011
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Pirate Gold

    Hi! Well the story is really nice. The language used is captivating and the grammar is precise. The one thing that I really liked about your piece is that you ...

    Jun 27, 2011
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Another day at the Mental Institute

    Hey Zephion. First of all I must say that it was a very good effort from your part. The story was funny overall with the end being even funnier. However, ...

    Jun 23, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Privileged Few

    Hello maybe. Well first up, I feel that the structure and grammar, the choice of words and description of your story are very good. You have an ability to "paint ...

    Jun 18, 2011
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: true love

    Hi there, Greatman. Listen what you wrote was okay - the idea you wanted to convey was good, but the entire piece was not well structured. You need to be ...

    Jun 18, 2011


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