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Re: Pinpoint
Hi There! Well it was an amazing poem! The choice of words was good, and the description was highly vivid. There was a certain flow to the whole poem which ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: Pirate Gold
Hi! Well the story is really nice. The language used is captivating and the grammar is precise. The one thing that I really liked about your piece is that you ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: Another day at the Mental Institute
Hey Zephion. First of all I must say that it was a very good effort from your part. The story was funny overall with the end being even funnier. However, ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: Privileged Few
Hello maybe. Well first up, I feel that the structure and grammar, the choice of words and description of your story are very good. You have an ability to "paint ...
Jun 18, 2011 -
Re: true love
Hi there, Greatman. Listen what you wrote was okay - the idea you wanted to convey was good, but the entire piece was not well structured. You need to be ...
Jun 18, 2011