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Welcome to YWS, and thanks for making this one of your first reviews. Yeah, I can see where you're getting at. I'll see if I can make some changes to ...

Also, thank you so much for the review! You're soooooo close to your second star (I think; I'm new, so I can't remember if you get your second star at ...

I'll be honest, I didn't think of the other people that could be, or are, down there with the person. And as I think about it, there are other people ...

Okay, as I was saying earlier, the first line in each stanza has 8 syllables, the second lines have 6, the third SHOULD have 9 (I noticed another mistake), and ...

Thank you for the review! I might expand this poem a little bit to add some more pacing or something like that, but I'm not too sure yet. Also, with ...

I know I don't have to capitalize the first word of each line, but I feel like it's more... I don't know? Formal? Something like that. (Sorry if this sounds ...

Thank you so much for making this your first review!

The last paragraph used to go as the following reads: "You're not alone," a voice told me, "Never was, or will be. And I forgive your sins; you came back ...

Also, thank you very much! I actually don't write poetry that often. Maybe I should do it more often...

When I wrote the part "I yearned and wished to see" I wasn't referring to the character wanting to see something in particular. I was thinking more along the lines ...