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  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Voids [continued]

    Hello Woflie. I hope you don't mind my calling you that. As usual, I'll start first with a few nitpicks. I hate (verb) shower. There needs to be some type ...

    Oct 13, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Jinxx (working title)

    Hello ScreamAndShout. This will be my tenth review so I'll try to do as best as I possibly can. I'm under the impression that the first paragraph that use put ...

    Oct 11, 2010
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Empty Sky

    Hello SilentPages. That was really interesting, and I read through the entire thing without even having my eyes wander for the slightest bit of time. You managed to hold my ...

    Oct 10, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Mixed

    Hello, Gabriella. Well, this story was really touching and even depressing. It's a shame how some people can judge another just by the color of their skin and all this ...

    Oct 10, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Especially When It's Amber

    Hello Persephoneia. Mind if I call you Seph? I hope not. This poem is about a person who is offered alcohol at a New Years Eve party. Later on, she ...

    Oct 10, 2010
  • Other » General, General Re: Demented Love

    Hello Foxy. I think I might've blushed a bit when I typed that. Anyway, on to the review before I can embarrass myself any further. Dearest love of my life ...

    Oct 10, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Obsession

    Hello, cfakc. My, that's a very unique name you've given yourself. Mind if I just refer to you as Cee? I like the story that you're trying to put across. ...

    Oct 10, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Beautiful?

    Hello Aqua. You were so kind as to greet me and I could not pass up the chance to thank you. So I will now with this review. Instead you ...

    Oct 10, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Voids.

    Hello Confessions. May I first say that you should rate this at least 16+ because of the presence of the word 'fuck' as not to scare away younger readers who ...

    Oct 10, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Testament

    Hello Princess. My, doesn't that sound friendly. My ears are being subdued with Secondhand Serenade so I'm really in a romantic story type mood. Anyway, I'll be reviewing your work ...

    Oct 10, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Two Of Us

    Hello, Jaz. I am glad to say that I will be reviewing this today. As this is my first time reviewing, I hope I measure up to your standards. ...“ ...

    Oct 9, 2010


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