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Thanks so much! Really appreciate the feedback. And I laughed at that star wars quote haha ^_^ -Zoom

Just curious. Obviously I haven't read much but from what I've seen I think you're at a good level and it made me wonder what your plans were. Not that ...

Oh sorry - I meant do you have any intention to find an agent one day and try to publish?

No worries! Oh, a series. And you've already made so much progress with it. Congrats! Can I ask - are you planning to query / have you already queried? I'm ...

English isn't your first language? Woooooow. I was impressed before. Now I'm entirely blown back. You're doing a fantastic job. You should be so proud of yourself.

Hello stygianmoon, Thanks for this review! Point taken about allegories ceasing to become one once pointed out. I didn't realise that disclaimer would be construed as a potential lack of ...

No worries! You're welcome. I think I recognised the age thing because I have the exact same problem. Middle grade stories just have so much heart, don't they? Also I ...

All the more impressive then :)

Hey, sorry to contradict, but in dialog you dont capitalise after a question mark or exclamation unless you are following with a noun or starting a new sentence. So the ...

Thanks for the review! You must have searched quite far back haha to find this. Rhythm is definitely something that I need to work on, it doesn't come naturally to ...

No prob I would use the word dorm instead of home then so as to not cause confusion

No problem! That answer is to practise writing different things and dont get hung up on the quality because you will waste so much time obsessing. Everyone goes through a ...

Thanks for the review!! :)

Thanks :)

Actually Sam and Willow sounds like the ship I never knew I wanted! Yaaay. Also romance is always a b for me too haha