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Re: Why I'm called anonymous
Wow, just great! I was thinking about doing a review, but there wasn't anything constructive I had to say. Congrats on making it to the Literary Spotlight, you deserved it! ...
Apr 1, 2014 -
Re: The Last Breath of Fire Chapter 1 Draft 2
Thanks for the review! :)
Mar 31, 2014 -
Re: The Sun and The Earth.
It seems like you really thought through your poem and what words you've used. You're welcome!
Mar 31, 2014 -
Re: The Last Breath of Fire Chapter 1 Draft 2
Thanks for the review! I've edited my mistakes now. Well, I was considering having a little of that in, but it won't be based on Norse Mythology in that case, ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: The Last Breath of Fire Chapter 1 Draft 2
Thanks for the reply! :)
Mar 25, 2014 -
Re: The Last Breath of Fire Chapter 1 Draft 1
Thanks for the review! :) When I look over it, I realize that I really forgot to change it into first person on some. The other sentences I just need ...
Mar 20, 2014 -
Re: The Last Breath of Fire Chapter 1 Draft 1
Okay so it works now.. Well lets just do a comment; It isn't completely based off Norse mythology, but I wanted at least Asgard from it, and I am considering ...
Mar 20, 2014 -
Re: The Last Breath of Fire Chapter 1 Draft 1
Test if I can reply now. Didn't work earlier
Mar 20, 2014 -
Re: The Last Breath of Fire, Prologue
Okay, I couldn't turn this into a reply, since it was too long! Thank you for the review! When someone is reviewing your work, you really realize what you need ...
Mar 11, 2014 -
Re: The Last Breath of Fire, Prologue
Wow thanks a lot! :)
Mar 11, 2014 -
Re: I've Been Marked - Chapter 1
Forgot to mark this as a review, if a mod+ sees it, please delete it. :)
Mar 11, 2014 -
Re: Random, Possibly Cliched, but then Again, Possibly Original, High Fantasy Epic Prologue (with the pointless love poem since removed)
Ahh okay. Anyways I think it may be the best choice. If i'm not completely wrong there is something in the epilogue who will keep the tension going on?
Mar 4, 2014
