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Zontafer

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Last Breath of Fire, Chapter 5

    Thanks for the wonderful review, Wolf! ^^ I didn't see this, as this way the 13th of May, when no one recieved notfications. The answer about the last parts is ...

    May 20, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Last Breath of Fire, Chapter 6

    Thanks for your review Wolf! First off, some of the typos is because I write in English, and not American. Woollen is just an old spelling of woolen. And about ...

    May 20, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Realistic Re: Blind - Chapter 15

    I realized it was 'Disneyland was a fail' haha

    May 11, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Last Breath of Fire, Chapter 5

    And btw, sorry for making this 'spammy', but silver is the lowest currency in the west. I decided to not add copper, as it would be too much like other ...

    May 10, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Last Breath of Fire, Chapter 5

    Wait.. what? I thought I had used 10 silver - 1 gold.. hm, I'd better fix this. Thanks for telling me! xD I got 300 words-ish on the next chapter, ...

    May 10, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Fantasy Re: Howl - Chapter 9

    Ahh, I see. Tell me when it's done! And you're welome :) - Zontafer

    May 10, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Last Breath of Fire, Chapter 5

    I don't think you were. If you're not honest it doesn't help me at all! ^^ I've added some more in the first paragraph and fixed the part I accidentally ...

    May 7, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Last Breath of Fire, Chapter 5

    Thanks again! Hm, seems like I managed to delete the rest of that sentence, thanks for telling! xD I agree with you that nothing really happened in this chapter, so ...

    May 7, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Last Breath of Fire, Chapter 2

    Thanks for your review! I couldn't agree with you more about the guard-story-thing, I thought that in the beginning as well, but wanted to see if other noticed it. ^^ ...

    May 7, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Last Breath of Fire Chapter 1 Draft 2

    Thanks for you review! Yeah, I'm glad for every review I can get! ^^ That was a very nice idea, I think I'll move it over to the scene where ...

    May 7, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Last Breath of Fire Chapter 1 Draft 1

    Thanks again for you review! Traveled back in time? If you are talking about the last lines, she means that his time may be precious, as in they are in ...

    May 6, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Last Breath of Fire, Prologue

    Thanks for your review, and welcome to YWS! Yeah, I know. I've been trying to stay as original as possible during my story. In fact, I haven't read any dragon ...

    May 6, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Last Breath of Fire, Chapter 5

    Thanks for once again a wonderful review, Laure! I've corrected the language stuff and added more description, also at the very end of the chapter. I'll tell you more about ...

    May 6, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Last Breath of Fire, Chapter 5

    Ahh I see, np^^

    May 6, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Last Breath of Fire, Chapter 5

    Thanks for you review! I love negative reviews, if you're not honest I wouldnt get anything out of it. But what do you mean by 'shout around for signs'?? Do ...

    May 6, 2014


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