Zolen

Happy you like the idea. True, this story would be lost on someone who's never played video games. But as it is, they wouldn't find much appeal in this story ...

hm Along with that I noticed left over gear from their deaths, a limbs worth of armor and a weapon. Apparently anything cut off stays where it's left rather then ...

Thank you for your thoughts, and yes I tend to make that typo a lot.

thank you for your thoughts

Thank you for your thoughts. The problem with that plan is people tend to auto correct things they read. So while I might spot commas and periods. Maybe even a ...

Thank you for your thoughts. Yes I doodled it out. If I finish a full book of these, I plan to go back through, fix the grammar up as much ...

Thank you for your thoughts. One of my favorite things about this story is how Zeno levels up. The main reason monsters don't in most games is because that would ...

Thank you for your thoughts. . Ash has never acted like that Throughout the story Zeno has mentioned her preference for painful kills. Such as strangling a knight to death ...

all errors you pointed on account for.

I'll make sure to get to the next chapters soon! :D Also, I think the title of this should be "A Dungeon Boss's Journal". .....*totally goes out of his way ...

Thank you for your thoughts. It's always good to keep your characters and plots around in some form, sometimes a story might not work out, but the parts of it, ...

Are you saying, if he had seen double self first, would he have been able to learn it? Yes he could have. What exactly would have happened to dodge I ...

hm, following your suggestion I gave a little bit more information on the two other choices.

Edited following your suggestions a bit. As for the bolding, while it may be overboard, I fear that as the plot progresses and more skills and terms appear, it's going ...

hahaha, sorry.