Zolen

it already exist, you just need to focus your- *opens google translate* -bilik mandi powers, and you will see it. it's invisible otherwise. High class magic coding was involved. Yay ...

Took your grammar suggestions into account, thank you, and happy you liked the chapter.

Hints of it shall be thrown out a lot given who the many characters given Zeno's main blessing is one of the underworld. Hints have been shown slowly and you ...

Thank you for the grammar help, and I shall welcome any more you point out with incredibly open arms. Happy you liked the fight scenes, I was worried I was ...

Admittedly in reply to your review of my work. It took me a while to find anything that didn't already have 3-5 reviews.

Happy that you liked it.

p.s I do agree more dialogue is needed in these chapters though I am not sure how to open it without creating awkward phrasing shifts most of the time. WHY ...

This is not a game, the world enjoys game logic, but the protagonist considers themselves the creature. He sums it up any more would be going into a entirely different ...

proposed alternative?

Zolen may have forgotten that he made it obvious on account of other things.

Happy that you seem to be enjoying the story still.

Happy that you seem to be enjoying this. Yes the numbers can be a issue, they are only compounded a few times in the beginning to push the idea that ...

This is a 27-30 chapter story, I plan to have these all later removed and then added as a final 28th or 30th chapter. But for now I am posting ...

Agility is how someone moves, dexterity has to do with the hands, how you handle things, intelligence is how smart you are, magic is how much raw power you have. ...

Plan to remove them and the other perspective shifts later, they are technically non-cannon, made rather as a tibit thing I will add at the end full of side stories. ...