Zizi16

I feel as if people need to read it in a more lyrical way. It's based more on a blues song from the Harlem Renaissance. Understand that and compare it ...

Thank you so much for what I felt was great criticism

Thank you all for constructive critiques and criticisms. I'm glad that you've enjoyed it. Very nice review and your criticism is very needed. Once again thank you.

Oh and let's not forget @Shakthi for her great use of constructive criticisms.

Hello all, this is the author herself Zizi. I realize I have a lot of grammar mistakes. A lot of this grammar like "ain't" and "gonna" comes from the environment ...

Hello all, this is the author herself Zizi. I realize I have a lot of grammar mistakes. A lot of this grammar like "ain't" and "gonna" comes from the environment ...

Thank you for your feedback. It's always nice to hear some constructive criticisms. I admit I am a bit new to writing and I have not always like writing. This ...

Those were supposed to be emojis XD

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It was meant for writing purposes. That's just how I write my poems. If it isn't so formal people can relate better. Thank you for the comment tho really %uD83D%uDE0A. ...