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Zizi16

  • Poetry » Literature, Other Re: Redemption

    This is very powerful. The idea of redemption is something a lot of people have problems vocalizing. I love the personification in this poem. " The guilt which creeps upon ...

    Jul 1, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: This black dress..

    There's just a few mistakes in here but it's alright we got your back. "We were jus like two birds..." Just change that "jus" into just. Also ".....it's been so ...

    Jul 1, 2016


To be a master of metaphor is the greatest thing by far. It is the one thing that cannot be learnt from others, and it is also a sign of genius.
— Aristotle, Poetics