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It's easily one of the longest reviews I've got, so a lot to take in at first. At some points, I forcefully tried to make the story fast paced (like ...

It kind of gave me the survival of the fittest vibes. The story is great but you could work on you formatting a bit. As LittleLee said, repeating word for ...

It kind of gave me the survival of the fittest vibes. The story is great but you could work on you formatting a bit. As LittleLee said, repeating word for ...

Thank you so much for the review and the links. :)

An article would be cool I guess. But in general anything that would help me grasp the idea better.

I did edit it a bit, but I really need improvement in making proper transitions between character perspectives. So I was wondering if you could suggest me something to read?

Thank you so much for your review. I did make some corrections as you suggested, so feel free to give it another read and point out if anything's amiss. I'm ...

Thank you for your review. It's just the first draft and I actually intend to edit it more. I must have missed the swear word. My apologies! And I know ...

*inconsistencies

Thank you so much for the review! I'll read it again and try to fix some of the consistencies you have pointed out. I'm glad you liked it though.

Thank you so much for your review. I'm glad that you liked it. :)

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Hey there! Zenith here for a review. So this is a continuation of an earlier piece titled the same. You have tried to portray the heartbreak felt by the characters ...

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Hey there! Zenith here for a review. So this is a continuation of an earlier piece titled the same. You have tried to portray the heartbreak felt by the characters ...

Ya it is. Happy to be of help. :)

Thank you for your review! I'm glad you liked it