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Thankn you for the review. I'll definitely improve on the things you mentioned.

Thank you for the review and suggestion. :)

Thank you so much for your review. I'll fix the errors and I'm glad you like the story. :)

Oh yeah definitely. The best thing about YWS is that it's like a community and everyone's really nice and supportive of everyone else. :)

It's understandable because in general protagonists are introduced in the beginning. Also, this premise does have the potential to be turned into a novel (only if someday, I stop being ...

I'm glad you could make out the perspective change that I used when introducing the actual protagonist without much confusion. About the decoy protagonists in the beginning, when I started ...

About who the actual protagonist is, I would have to request you to read this story once more. You're a little confused. Vye is just one of the many people ...

I wasn't expecting a review after this long. But I'm really glad you like it. :)

Reading this makes me want to rewatch Sherlock all over again. The lyrics were spot on. If you write any more songs for your musical, do share here. They are ...

I would like to leave a quick comment here. Being an atheist, it feels especially relatable since, unlike my religious counterparts, I have no one to turn to in tough ...

I was afraid this didn't make much sense, but you interpreted it so well. Thank you so much for the review.

Thank you for the review. 1) Actually what I wanted to say in the clouds para is that even though the clouds drifted away and vanished gradually, the shapes are ...

Thank you soooo much!

Thank you for appreciating my poem. P.S. - I like your username. Cows are adorable and such nice creatures.

Thank you for the review. As for the bold lines, I wanted to experiment a bit with the formatting and then decided to use it to focus on specific ideas. ...