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Re: buried love
-WARNING-WARNING-WARNING-WARNING-WARNING-WARNING-WARNING- ::Its Review Time:: ::Negatives:: •Theme - In the beginning of this very poetic drama, I was kinda lost. Instead of coming in head strong, I
Sep 14, 2017 -
Re: The Pink Ribboned Cage
Greetings, Zel here to give you some feedback. ::Positives:: The structure of this poetic piece is the structure I expect to see in every poetic piece. The constant flow of ...
Jun 23, 2017 -
Re: Consequences
Zel here to drop a review! ::Positives:: To begin my literary dissection, I would like to recognize the things that you, as a author, did to make this story more ...
Jun 10, 2017
