Zedderman

Thank you!

Unfortunately I cannot reveal who the narrator is without ruining the story and thank you for giving me grammar tips, I blame spell-check on my ipod

Unfortunately, I AM unprofessional in both my spelling and my manner, I was trying to get into character, but I will remedy this for the next extract

VERY good, not what I was expecting at all! This is the best thing I have read for a long time and I'm Glad it isn't too depressing, thank you ...