User avatar

Zecru

  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Envy

    I originally suggested "What is envy?" to my English teacher and she suggested to cut "What is" out. It's supposed to be like you're asking me what envy is.

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Envy

    I originally suggested "What is envy?" to my English teacher and she suggested to cut "What is" out. It's supposed to be like you're asking me what envy is.

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Envy

    I originally suggested "What is envy?" to my English teacher and she suggested to cut "What is" out. It's supposed to be like you're asking me what envy is.

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Envy

    I appreciate the help! I knew that part was kind of weird when I wrote it but couldn't figure out how to fix it at the time. Thank you for ...

    Oct 23, 2013
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Other Re: The thing unseen

    I liked it. Although, the sense of mystery you gave me about the thing unseen was kind of removed when you straight-up said it was the grim reaper/death. Still good.

    Oct 22, 2013


HONK
— The Golden Goose